Monday, 24 April 2017

Progress From a Better Process.

It has been a while since I sat down to write a blog post as I have been so busy with applying various edits and so on to my manuscript. Well, I am pleased to say that after going through it, as well as applying feedback from a couple of the beta readers (more will be applied later), the manuscript got to as good a place as I can get it right now. So, yesterday, I sent it off to be edited before posting it to Amazon.

I have been lucky this time around. Mr. Brian Niemeier, the Dragon Award-winning author of the novel SoulDancer, has undertaken editing duties for me, something I consider a real honor as his work speaks for itself. As I have mentioned before, a mistake I made in the past with my first book, Nomads, was that I did not have it properly edited and pretty much rushed it onto Amazon. I look back on it and still cringe to myself, but with this book, I think I have managed to avoid that mistake. I took more time editing it myself and asking beta readers to pick it apart, two things alone that I never did before and that has been an interesting ride. In that regard, special thanks must go to Michael Fisher, a friend of mine from work who gave me his spare time to beta read, Bre Faucheux, who gave me some amusing feedback when she had picked up on some of the English slang I had used, Angela Night, who provided some in-depth feedback for me, especially with the characters and some of the more technical aspects, and also Brian Hall, who pointed out an overuse of exposition in places that I could cut down on.

But it doesn't end there.

One aspect I really wanted to focus on was audiobooks, but sadly I lacked both the talent and the equipment in order to record my own. One day, Brian (Niemeier) tweeted about a man whom he had spoken to about audiobooks for his own work, JimFear138, and vouched for the quality of his services. Jim and I had a number of conversations, the result was him agreeing to record the audiobook version of my book. Jim had performed the prologue of my short story, Darkest Before Dawn, to show me what he could do and I was blown away by it. Once the manuscript has been edited, it will be sent to him to work his magic with and I cannot wait for the results.

I will keep those interested in my work updated because this time I have worked with some absolute professionals to make this book, titled Penance, a much better product than before. I can look at this and say I am more than proud of it. In the mean time, I shall present you with the finished cover, by the wonderful Peta-Lynn Fraser and ask that you watch this space.


Thursday, 6 April 2017

Righting a Wrong.


Back when I was a child and read comics heavily, there were some individual issues, series, and stories that will always stay with me. Yes, I know many of you have read about me washing my hands of Marvel as of late but there will always be some of the classic stories that will always be close to my heart. A lot of those stories were written by one man, Peter David, and thanks to him among a few others, I will always have something to smile about when I think back on what, to me, were the golden days of Marvel.


Peter David is not doing so well these days. He wrote in his blog a few days ago that he was in serious financial trouble. His ex wife had withdrew a large chunk of his money from their account to divorce him a while back, he had to use the rest to pay for his own lawyer. After a period of repaying the IRS and running out of money, they seemed to forget about it, but then they came calling for the rest.
With a penalty.
And added interest.
I felt so bad reading what the poor guy was going through that I decided to write this piece in support of this great writer. I will be donating at the end of the month when I get paid, he has offered to sign anything sent to him when donating, and part of me wants to take him up on that offer, but it feels a little like I am taking advantage if I were to take him up on that.


I rarely, if at all, promote crowd funding schemes because I have little faith or trust in them anymore. There are some that would laugh at David for this fate and maybe call him a tax cheat. This is something not caused by himself, but a greedy ex wife who saw an opportunity to take advantage of him and did so without a second thought. It is not the first time I have known something like this to happen to a man and my heart goes out to him. At the time of writing this, his campaign is doing well and is almost at the half way point.
Even if you cannot donate, spread the word, as writers like this man deserve all the help they can get.

Monday, 3 April 2017

Beating a Dead Horse.


I decided that I would have to write one more thing about Marvel comics and its continuing circling of the drain. I thought I could leave it alone after the last piece that I had written but sure enough, something came along that I couldn't ignore with regards to the whole thing.

Bleeding Cool, a website that I don't hold in high regard, published a story featuring an interview with David Gabriel, Marvel's VP of sales, and his views on the company's position. When asked why the company's sales fell so much, he commented that readers were "nose turning" at the things they had been doing "successfully for the past three years". He followed this up with the almost breathtaking line of "what we heard was that people didn't want any more diversity. They didn't want female characters out there."

The comments went viral and there was quite a response, my own included, and Gabriel was forced to provide an update to Bleeding Cool as to what he meant. I will give Bleeding Cool their dues, they have covered this thing quite well and even explored that part of Marvel's fall was a lack of superstar artists to drive those sales. I can think of no major artist that works for Marvel, not one, they all left to do work for independent companies. Image comics was created after several of the top artists walked out after the way they had been treated, paving the way for the likes of The Savage Dragon, Spawn, and of course, The Walking Dead.

What bugged me about Gabriel's response was that he totally missed the point of it all. Nobody out there in their right mind gives a toss about the race or gender of the characters as long as you get a good story out of it. Saga, the Image comic by Brian K Vaughn and Fiona Staples, is a perfect example of this. Marvel, however, seemed to be doing its best to shove various politics down the reader's throats, jokes at their expense, and of course, changing long established characters to suit a different audience. How did that do? Well, here are a couple of examples:

All-New Wolverine 1 sold 119,786 copies
The latest issue sold 29,255 copies.

Captain America Steve Rogers 1 sold 99,768 copies
The latest issue sold 36,610 copies

Thor 1 sold 150,862 copies
The latest issue (now Mighty Thor) sold 40,175 copies

Angela Queen of Hel 1 sold 39,271 copies
The last issue (canceled) sold 14,091 copies

I could go on and on about this, but the point is clear. In more ways than one, customers simply were not buying what Marvel was selling them. But in the company's mind, it was us the consumer who were to blame for this.
Ok then.

The writers of some of these comics have pretty resistant attitudes to the whole thing on Twitter. In part, I do not blame them because I'm guessing they have taken some abuse over all this (please don't do that) but their defiance in defending their material is just as forlorn. Jon Del Arroz, an author friend of mine on Twitter, took a look at some of the Marvel staff and the way they behave on social media in a blog piece, they are almost identical in their attitudes and dislikes, no real diverse opinions among them. Jon would later update this more in another piece, it helped show to me that these writers have helped chase off readers with their attitudes. Even G Willow Wilson's response in her blog about the whole affair was quite telling, especially when she mentioned social justice.

As I read into this whole thing, I came to realize that I was basically beating a dead horse by continuing to talk about it. I simply will not waste my time anymore with the company as it appears they are not going to change anytime soon. Readers like me have been made to feel like they are unwanted, that they are old news. Fair enough, our money will happily be spent elsewhere without regret. Indie comics, like indie authors, are more worthy of your purchases because they respect their readership and feedback.

Without fans who appreciate your work, the work itself becomes flat, flavorless and avoidable. It looks like Marvel forgot that along time ago.